I thought this was nicely animated, but the whole zombie types thing is well-trodden ground.
The familiarity of it prevented me from enjoying the humour, so I think you would benefit from coming up with a more original concept.
I found the voice a little flat and found my mind drifting. I know this was probably a stylistic choice, but try a more dynamic vocal performance to hold the viewer's attention and sell the humour.
Overall, there's potential here, so I'll be keen to check out your other work.
This is my favourite cartoon of all time.
I watched it so many years ago and shared it with everyone I knew -- strangely they didn't get it and seemed to think it reflected something dark about my personality. Which was exactly what I was hoping it would do!
It's such a perfect mix of the comical, bizarre, dark provocative and genuinely sad. I only wish I had the talent and imagination to take a viewer on such a roller coaster ride of laughs, thoughts and emotions.
You're a genius, Doki!
Horror movie? I thought this was just a documentary of my life.
Just kidding, this looks awesome. I understand some of the symbolism and allegory in it, and if that follows through to the finished film, it will be very interesting.
I'm also interested in making anti-establishment stuff, but my plan was to hide it in light-hearted cartoon fluff -- it never occurred to me to just go balls to the wall like this!
I'd love to work with you on something one day. But then again, I'd expect no less than for you to deem me an elitist Illuminati underling trying to co-opt your work, so I know (and hope) that'll never happen!
Thanks for the new material for my nightmares. I will be following your work.
This is high quality work, with a great visual style, good voice work and an awesome score. However, I'm not sure I got the purpose of the whole thing.
I'm assuming it's meant to be some kind of parable to encourage kids to eat their veggies, but the message is a little muddy.
Also if you're going to write for kids, it might be best to avoid using guns and liquor as heroic plot devices -- and it's certainly a bad idea to tell them how to make a mini flame thrower.
Pacing seemed a little off to me, too. Looks like it was designed with commercial breaks in mind?
Still, nothing some more effort in the writing department can't solve, and overall a very professional effort.
Love the randomness, and the animation, artwork and music are all very solid. Most of all, it made me laugh out loud, good stuff.
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